AICE Media Studies AS- Schultz, S

       We were not satisfied with our first draft of our film and decided to re-do it completely and change the entire script as well as the actors and locations. We re-wrote the script and  made the plot more obvious and interesting. We decided we would have the first scene be the girls arriving to school together and getting out of the car to talk about their first day. The girls ’  main conversation is about seeing the boy they all like, who is Troy. We  filmed this scene in the Tami Sola parking lot. The next scene is the girls walking through the hallway and stopping at the lockers to talk. In this scene, they are all looking for Troy because they haven’t seen him yet. Alex, who is the main character is a mean girl and thinks Troy likes her best out of all of  them. The last scene is the girls arriving to class and Troy coming in right as the last bell rings. Alex says hi to him and all the girls get flustered.        ...

                                                                  Peer Review         After receiving peer review on our project, we were given a lot of ideas and suggestions. The first we got was that it was hard to hear  the dialogue , which was likely because  of the background noises of the gulf cart at school. Another comment we received was that there were too many transitions, which will be an easy fix. There were several questions about the plot and some people sai d it was hard to figure out what the plot is based off of the  two minute  film we produced. This will be a bit more difficult to fix but we do have a plan. Someone also suggested  that we could add subtitles because it was hard for them to hear some of the words. The editing...