Peer Review

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    After receiving peer review on our project, we were given a lot of ideas and suggestions. The first we got was that it was hard to hear the dialogue, which was likely because of the background noises of the gulf cart at school. Another comment we received was that there were too many transitions, which will be an easy fix. There were several questions about the plot and some people said it was hard to figure out what the plot is based off of the two minute film we produced. This will be a bit more difficult to fix but we do have a plan. Someone also suggested that we could add subtitles because it was hard for them to hear some of the words. The editing was also done on the wrong software, which will be completely fixed before out final product is complete. We were also told it would be a good idea to add some different camera angles in and to slow down the talking and overall film.  

       Since we received so many suggestions, we have decided we are going to re-film the entire film before it is time to send it off to AICE. We will be re-filming with a new cast, and a new location. We will improve the ability to hear talking by removing masks and turning up the volume of the voices higher than the music, more than we did before. We are going to be re-editing the entire film as well, so we will rethink the transitions and take out the ones that are excessive or too much. As for the plot, we have already begun making a new script that makes it very obvious that the plot of the movie is that the three best friends all like the same boy and are trying to win him over. As for subtitles, we are going to try to make the talking as clear and understandable as possible, but if it is still at all difficult to understand, we will add subtitles. Lastly, we will incorporate new camera angles and slow down the dialogue and speed of the film.  

We will begin re-writing the script and making it more obvious what the plot is meant to be. We have found members of our new cast and only need one more. So far, I have decided to have Ella Phillips as Sabrina and Lanie Phillips as Alex. We are choosing to cast Jordan Sabuda as Troy.